就修改下 语法 和罗嗦的地方 应该没什么大问题

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In”Unique Solutions to Pollution” (Lecture Ready2, 2006), the lecturer mainly discusses the problem of air pollution and trees are a great low technology solution to air pollution. The lecturer also explains the process of how SO2 is formed and becomes acid rain. SO2 can cause damage for both people and the environment. And trees provide both environmental services and economic benefits. Trees help people save money, reduce temperature, and lower home electricity bills.

感觉有些Chiglish……

It mainly discusses the problem called air pollution in "Unique Solutions to Pollution"(Lecture Ready2.2006),and the trees as a great low technology solution to that.THe lecture also explains the forming process of SO2 and acid rain.It is generally konwn that SO2 can do damages to both our human beings and the environment.As an offer of providing both environmental services and economic benefits,Trees help people reduce the expenses,control the temperature,and lower home electricity bills.

是要把你文中所有意思都表示出来，还是要最精简大意？
以下为精简大意：

In "Unique Solutions to Pollution", the writer(lecturaer) discussed the forming process and damages of acid rain, and suggested that trees are the most cost-effective solution for air pollution and can provide multiple benifits for the environment.

我是一个初中生 大概看了下意思应该是这样 希望能被采用
In "Unique Solutions to Pollution", the writer(lecturaer) discussed the forming process and damag