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如果你想说‘让我们欢迎香港中华厂商联合会给我们致词’，可以翻译成
Let's welcome the Hongkong Chinese manufacturer Association to give us a speech.

如果致词是名词主语的话，可用 The speech by Hongkong Chinese manufacturer Association

不能.

口语化的说法, 是先对讲话人做个简介. let's welcome the Mr/Mrs xxxx from Chinese Manufacturers’ Association of HK. he/she will address the issue of ......

如果那句话只是个名称,
The speech from Chinese Manufacturers’ Association of HK
节日讲话可以说
the greetings from Chinese.....

你的翻译是正确的。

其他可选翻译：
Let's welcome the Chinese manufacturers’ Association of Hong Kong to deliver us a speech.
Speech by the Chinese manufacturers’ Association of Hong Kong.
Welcome speech/remarks by the Chinese manufacturers’ Association of Hong Kong.

Speech by the Federation of Hong Kong