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来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/05/16 02:07:57
My view on the super girl show
If you tell us you don’t know the super girl, we may think :Oh , you must come from the Mars「 」. As we know ,Super girl is based on the American Idol. This TV show broadcasted since 2004 is a talent search contest for youngsters. According to this TV show, Some girls really become the super girls, because they are stars now. And millions of youngsters have become the fans of the super girls, especially students who are crazy to pursue the super girl. Super girl means different things to different people. It means opportunity to make a better life or it means relaxation to a tired heart. But to be honest, I don’t like it at all. When I watched it on TV, I would turn it off. I found this TV show is full of unfruitful tears. Only a few of the singers are excellent , some of them just like drolls. In addition , I think this TV show makes bad effect on both audience and singers . Youngsters need study without the super girl, if they think Super g

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我的意图在超级女孩展示
如果您告诉我们您不知道超级女孩, 我们可以认为:Oh, 您必须来自火星吗? ? 。如同我们知道, 超级女孩根据美国神像。这个电视展示被播放自2004 年以来是一场天分查寻比赛为年轻人。根据这个电视展示, 一些女孩真正地成为超级女孩, 因为他们现在是星。并且成千上万年轻人成为了超级女孩, 特别是是疯狂的追求超级女孩的学生风扇。超级女孩意味不同的事对另外人民。它意味机会做更好生活或它意味放松对疲乏的心脏。但老实讲我不喜欢根本。当我观看了它在电视, 我会关闭它。我发现了这个电视展示是充分的无效的泪花。只一些歌手优秀, 有些象drolls 。另外, 我认为对观众和歌手的这电视展示牌子坏作用。年轻人需要研究没有超级女孩, 如果他们认为超级女孩时尚和太疯狂以至于不能追求他们, 他们必须是在二个头脑里在研究中, 是不利。当它来到那些歌手, 我感到更加哀伤, 这些女孩有简单的生活方式前面, 但展示投入了他们在他们不了解的这泡影什么发生, 隔夜, 他们变得著名。所以, 他们简单的生活方式是残破的并且他们必须面对很多事他们从未有头和看。更坏的平静, 越来越女孩将仿效他们并且这个社会将是太功利主义的。在词, 超级女孩是这项社会公共事业的结果。最后,I 请想要说,be 清醒在您的生活中, 总不作是著名隔夜。That'all, 谢谢。