谁能帮我修改一篇英语稿子

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内容是这样：
Holle，everyone.My name is xxx.I am forteen years old .I am from xxx Primary school.Today I to introduce my family.
Introduce my mother first.She is a worker and she works hard.She takes to heart my study.She is versatile.She will knit sweater.And my father is an engineer.He is very carefully and working very hard.He usually guides me to study.So my studying inclass is still quite good.My father is not tall.I did not get his heredity.I like reading books,I like to read<<lac why>>wait abook.My Chinese is not good,but my Maths result is always more okay.My advantage is to like to read book,but my weakness have something to do with read books.I like to sit on the bed to read books in the evening.
My family is so.Ilove my family.That is all.Thank you.
小学六年级的水平。帮忙改改。别人不许在比赛上抄袭。
不尽要修改，还要适当的加一些内容。

Holle，everyone.My name is xxx.I am forteen years old .I am from xxx Primary school.Today I want to introduce my family.

I'll introduce my mother first.She is a good mother.
She is take care of me.Because she takes much time to teach my study.
She is versatile.She will knit sweater.
Then i'll introduce my father.
He is an engineer.
On the work,He is very hard and carefully .
He usually guides me to study.
So my study in our class is still on top.
My father is not tall.
I don't get his heredity.I'm a big boy.
I like reading books,I like to read<<????????>>and so on.
My Chinese is not good,but my Maths result is always more okay.
My advantage is reading book.
I like to sit on the bed to read books in the every evening.Than i'll have sweet sleep.
It's my family.I love my family.
That is all.Thank you.

十万个为什么...又专门的翻译.我不太清楚.
你换本书.