帮我修改 狗狗的英语文章。最好加些句子,使文章连贯一点。

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帮我修改 狗狗的英语文章。最好加些句子,使文章连贯一点。

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I do not know why I like dogs,in the
past I had a
very lovely dog, he has white hair and has a pair
of big eyes.
He is very clever and lively. every time I went home from school, he was always at door waiting for me, wagged his tail.His name is guaiguai . he likes eating, such as mea -l bone and even cabbage, orange, he ate with relish.
One day, I took him outside, walked on the street。unfortunately,i did not see him. I was looking for him a whole day, all to no avail. I am very sad and cried all day.
Until now, I still miss him the day that we are play together
I think now he is adopted by someone and i hope he has a good life .

I do not know why I like dogs.
In the past I had a very lovely dog, which had white hair and a pair
of big eyes and whose name was guaiguai.
He was very clever and lively. Every time I went home from school, he was always at the door waiting for me, wagging his tail.He enjoyed eating, such as bones, cabbage, and even oranges. He ate with enjoyment.
One day, I took him out, walking him on the street.Unfortunately,I lost him. Therefore, I was looking for him the whole day, but in vail. I got very sad and cried all day.
Until now, I still miss him the day that we are play together
I think now he is adopted by someone and i hope he has a good life .

我不知道为什么我喜欢狗,在
过去我有一个
很可爱的狗,他已白发和一双
的大眼睛。
他非常聪明,活泼。我每次去从学校回家,他总是在门口等着我, wagged他tail.His的名字是guaiguai 。他很喜欢吃,如测量升骨,甚至白菜,橘子,他吃的津津有味。
有一天,我把他之外,走在街道上。不幸的是,我没有看到他。我一直在寻找他一整天都无济于事。我很伤心,哭了一整天。
到现在为止,我仍然怀念他的一天,我们在一起玩
我认为现在他是通过别人,我希望他有一个美好的生活。