谁能帮看看有没有语法错误

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/06/21 16:35:34
I have many hobbies and my favorites hobby is reading. I usually read at my own room every night. I often do the reading by myself, because I want to relax by my own. I usually read for half an hour but I read for more than 2 hours on weekend. I think reading can bring me a lot of knowledge, and can improve my Chinese as well as my English level. I really like reading and I hope I can be a writer in the future.

1.favorites hobby
favorite既是adj.特别受喜爱的，又是n.特别喜爱的人（或事物）
如果作名词，就可不要后面的hobby了。作形容词就应去掉你加的favorites的“s”
2.I usually read at my own room every night. usually和后面的every night对应不妥。

以我的水平看貌似没有。